Just For You Comments

I am Alone Not lonely You touch me Where it matters My heart of hearts Seared with a smile Laughter like a lark Lovely like crystal Your eyes saying Something sad When lips fail Desperately Forget me Never She stayed within the shadow of her smile...

If this is true very sad and if u r just conveying cell her up young man poetry flows in lovers veins and then only one can live in ones lovers domain If one has gone forget her she may not be having interest find another young man ur are just 22 read my poem O DAWN and see how time does flee fifty plus years away was she a real loving DAWN for me

A very sad poem on broken love. Nice flow of motion. Enjoyed.

A nice write.... But deep sorrow of lost love is depicted.. Thnx for sharing... Naila

I still stay awake all night in the balcony...... powerful sense of longing, you are conveying in this poem dear poet. thank u very much. tony