Friday, July 21, 2006

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Just for you
I would cry a river.
It would be the size of the Nile.
And it would only take me a short while.
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Claude Davis III
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Jolanta Gradowicz 21 July 2006

Well, there is real power of love in the poem. I like this poem. But, if I may interfere, the last stanza is different with comparison to the former ones. It is like an explanation for the former stanzas, and it is not necesarry, I think. Anyway, it is a very good poem with strong emotions.

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Stephanie Mackedanz 21 July 2006

DuDe~ This is a SAWEET poem! ! ! WoW you are really great at witing! ! Good Job! ! ! Hope to read more! ! ! Steph

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