Friday, March 25, 2011

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Rating: ★4.5

The old grey goose no longer sings

As he falls from grace and flings his wings

And flings his wings to no avail
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Jake Deeds
Old Wings
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Howard Savage 09 January 2016

There is a soft metaphor in this poem good

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Anthony Burge 07 April 2013

Down, down feather down. Nice work.

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C.R. Clark 25 July 2011

A very humorous poem. The old grey goose found practical use. Thanks for the chuckle. Richard

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Vanessa Hughes 19 June 2011

That poor goose, though it made me chuckle. Enjoyed it Nessy x

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