Monday, August 17, 2009

Just Fall Comments

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I used to be pretty.
Now I'm just plain.
Time has taken it's toll.
Hard work made me strong
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Israh Sadan
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Afzal Shauq 17 August 2009

no doubt..its really a good poem with deep way done..interesting, meaningful and thoughful idea.you expresed well..romantich way and the cognitive type..seems that you are a good poet with rich ideas..and sure you got a rich brain as its seen in your other poems too wonderful..enjoyed this poem a lot 10/10

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Israh Sadan

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