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let justice be a friend let it live in your heart let no subordinates be faked for their superior's sake..............let there be no discrimiationfor their worthshow on the field......very good narration inthr for m of tale.....10 rad mine disparity

a poem that tells story... nice work! ! ! =]

I like how you started the story with a historical feel and brought it to the present with skill full creativity. Thank you for sharing :)

A very good poem. Ron

I really enjoyed the story behind it and i love the way you write. It's simple yet powerful. Im still trying to write that way. Anyways, this poem rocks, i mean it was really great! ~Izzzzzy~

The famous lady grace.. Hmmmmm.......good write lady I wonder who taught you to write Good job...Gracy Dont forget 2 pray

I like how this poem doesn't just sound like words on a page, but actual thoughts. Very well written!

Your poem tells a story well and the last four lines spaced out as they are make the poem. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

liked the story behind it well written

An interesting and well written poem, Lady Grace. I enjoyed reading it. Carl.

:) Very good I love how it sounds and the way you say it makes you think. Thumbs up from me! Keep writing.

nice read.. i like how it read..

There's a nice balance to this wonderfully penned piece my friend...you have done well....and the justice proud...10

let their subordinates never suffer........ fantastic write.........