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Hey! Hey! Oh Jacqueline Your narration is racy dear why don't try writing script to Hollywood movies..... Um I enjoyed every line of the poem just like brick by brick line after ever poetic line drives to the theme - 'Maybe she's going to give her husband another try, and this time, they'll take it slow. Two kids are waving at me, ' Ground breaking style! Hey I love it..... Hey Do You to have 2 kinds! Hello i also two kids - ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) Just for fun come on laugh..... But hope you understood..........

Real picture of life, woven so nicely.. Sometimes methink that, which song there are listening to.. Good poem! !

Great poem. It can be fun to observe people. Great write.

Creatively narrated story in this poem..i like 'Now' and 'Later' approach..the story quite touching, sighing a lil hahahaha i wonder if all days what we will see soon, hopw we learn something from all lessons...you create good picture of a scene in reality, about life..i like the story.. :) Unwritten Soul