Saturday, March 14, 2009

Just Don'T See That Anymore Comments

Rating: 4.4

Kids these days miss so much
Remember life's soft touch?
Sticks and stones,
John Wayne and Jesse James.
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Jay Aguiniga
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* Sunprincess * 01 July 2014

..........congratulations....and so nicely you penned this beautiful poem....yes the world is continuously changing....and I suppose we all must change with it or be left behind....

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Jayne Davies 01 July 2013

A lovely poem. Well done!

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Kasia Fedyk 02 July 2012

What a beautiful poem, filled with magic of the heart and whispers of the soul. I love it very much! Thank you.

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Captain Cur 01 July 2012

Great nostalgic poem with a point. I thought the refrain worked effectively. Good write!

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Jay Aguiniga

Jay Aguiniga

Scottsbluff Nebraska
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