Sunday, May 11, 2014

Just Don't Comments

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To all of those who feel so weak
Just Don't
To all of those who feel such heartache
Just Don't
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Lyn Paul
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014

Beautiful advice...Very true said in each lines. We blame ourselves for many things and these things make us weak. You have presented it beautifully. Loved reading it.

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Valerie Dohren 23 May 2014

A poem of very wise advice. We spend so much of our time blaming ourselves for all manner of things that cannot be helped, and so often we blame others too when we should be more understanding. Good one Lyn.

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Hazel Durham 18 May 2014

Powerful, soul searching write that tells it, as it is, about conflict, pain, heartache and sadness, that we can overcome by standing tall from learning and moving forward from life's hardships! With great insight you have written an amazing poem!

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i appreciate the tstyle with which you convey

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Francie Lynch 14 May 2014

Well-versed, well-dipped.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 12 May 2014

powerfully touches, very inspiring.

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