Thursday, May 29, 2014

Just... Cry Comments

Rating: 4.9

Cry tonight
Like there has been no rain
Cry tonight
To release the pain
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Lyn Paul
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 June 2020

A powerful and insightful write imbued with a great message. Liked how the Poetess crafted this poem. It fuels the mind to ponder about the good side of crying. The closure lines are very uplifting. Onto my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 June 2020

Our pains and sufferings must be released. We can release them through crying otherwise they will lurk inside our heart and mind and in due time they will make us bitter and consequently consume us leading to darkness.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2018

There is no rain but crying brings rain in life. Crying expresses emotion from deepest core of perception. The fear of loss makes a person cry. Crying releases pain or sorrow. An amazing poem is very neatly and brilliantly penned...10

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Valsa George 07 January 2015

Tears have cathartic effect..... Crying is a great way of releasing our pent up emotions of pain, fear and anxiety! After a rain just as the leaves are washed clean, our mind gets clearer when flushed out with tears! An enjoyable poem with psychological bearings!

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Dinesan Madathil 19 July 2014

They say, Crying is ornamental to kids and women perhaps but a shame upon grown up men. But when we cry we lose drop our pretensions and arrogance and become sober otherwise.. I am waiting to cry for a while.

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Thoughtful and therapeutic my friend!

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Mark Dillon 17 July 2014

Such a warm soul, lovely sentiment Lyn

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Amitava Sur 27 June 2014

It's a beautiful write Lyn, I loved it the way you wrote with such an easy flow, I think one of your best writes. Very, very nice.... love you Lyn.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014

Beautiful flow of tears that release the clouds of pain. Shed those tears and release those pains Very true said, Lyn. Really shedding tears release our pain and to believing in self is most important. I know it takes time to believe self but with practice its possible. I feel that this poem is just written for me. This is the beauty of your poem. Whoever reads should feel its written for them. Loved it. Beautiful way you have presented.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 June 2014

Yes its gud to cry to release the hurt feel. Yor rhymin was awesome here. Kudos. So nice to read u again.

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R.benjamin Abate 16 June 2014

Very nice write. So true. Sometimes you just need to let go. Thanks.

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Sandra Feldman 14 June 2014

Such a deep and lovely poem, laced with worded tears that help dissipate our fears. Thank you, Lyn

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 June 2014

So cry tonight Shed those tears Each teardrop released will move the fear Beautiful verse!

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Valerie Dohren 05 June 2014

Crying is cathartic, which we all need at times. Well expressed Lyn, a great write.

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Kanav Justa 03 June 2014

we have to sail in this world all by ourselves.. we shouldn'nt be dependent on others... we may find good people in our lives and they might help us sail through some part of our lives... but evemtually they will have to leave us one day... and we will have to carry on..all by ourslelves... so what is important is the fact that we bileve in oursselves.. no matter what phase we are going through in our lives... nice write

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Hazel Durham 01 June 2014

To cry is to release our emotions to replenish and heal, a superb write that goes so deep into our individual psyche!

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Amitava Sur 31 May 2014

Very well said Lyn. Possibly that only can remove the heavy stone, laden on my heart with sorrows. But sorry I cannot cry though I try, but I liked your prescription

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