Just Call Me Darling Comments

Very entertaining posing a number of questions which makes the reader pause and think.

Congrats for writing wonderfully!

Great write. There 'ifs' in all life trips. Every desire depends on something or the other. Well written

Existence in this world is because for every positive note there exists an negative one. Neither can be ignored. To be loved and accepted an strong balance has to be maintained with all the five senses, one should be clear as to his limitations, when to begin and when to stop. This you will accept is quite complex.

A brilliant piece. Truly amazing work.

Very good and very very different......

Let your pen be free as the senses..good attempt congrats..

This leaves me smiling while reading. A good one, dear Aung Si. It is nice to see how the poet confronts the reader in the beginning of each verse and comes with a concluding suggestion, ..

Very different..unique of its kind. Delightful to read

You will be namby-pamby essence of bliss If lips are allowed just to accept a kiss. This is one of my favorite parts.

The five senses of the human being, Sight, Sound, Smell, Taste, Touch.

Nice poem, it sounds different than i ever read from you before, but the poem is good...write more poems as you like freely without thinking what people may think about it_Soul

another great poem.I just love reading ur poem :)

The five senses bring pleasure and stimulaiton can be bought The sixth and seventh senses bring peace of mind, and come only from within. Mind boggling poem. A play between the precious and the cheap.

Delightful to read, Aungsi: the great question posed upon the readers, and the conditional contradiction, leaving a room for decision... Nicely penned.

I like the second part, music of love, romantic songs of promise vibrate the heart! Nice poem! ! !

It's terrible. In your language it probably sounds wonderful, but there is definitely something missing in the translation. Thanks, Mark Walters

an excellent piece of poetry right here, i honestly couldnt choose which was my fave stanza, each compliments the other nicely, this a greatly structured piece great job

Heart touching poem very nice and well written with such emotion.

one of the best love poems that appealed me most.