Monday, January 12, 2009

Just Breathe Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looking in your eyes
a dark brown, with a hint of gold fire.
So dark, I want to get lost in them.
In those luscious eyes.
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Dolan Doran
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Dark Gurl 55 19 January 2009

beautifully pened, , keep on writting dear..

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Fred Omorogbe 16 January 2009

Damn! ! ! ... you're good! ! ! Had me so engrossed in the scenario... Almost saw it all happening :) . Great use of words.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 January 2009

OOOOOOOOO God im runnin out of breath.please someone call 911 for me unless i too is allowed to join the 'hutt pardee ' Mouth watrein piece you got there Dolan.

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Dolan Doran

Dolan Doran

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