Ray of lights were leaking from the blue sky
But, inside I was feeling blue without knowing why
The blues singers were still performing in my head
Creating with my feeling of blues, an
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There are indeed times that the blues just come, no matter what. This is shared in this poem in a wonderful way. Well done!
A very sentimental poem from a sensitive soul. I like your imagery and phrasing. I wish there is a way to paint your blue with white.
Creatively, you used that word 'blue' in every possible way that you could! A very commendable poetic presentation! : -)