Sunday, February 3, 2019

Just Blue Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ray of lights were leaking from the blue sky
But, inside I was feeling blue without knowing why
The blues singers were still performing in my head
Creating with my feeling of blues, an
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COMMENTS
Practicing Poetess 02 March 2019

Creatively, you used that word 'blue' in every possible way that you could! A very commendable poetic presentation! : -)

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Hans Vr 15 February 2019

There are indeed times that the blues just come, no matter what. This is shared in this poem in a wonderful way. Well done!

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Christa D 02 March 2019

Thanks a lot! I appreciate your review!

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C F 07 February 2019

A very sentimental poem from a sensitive soul. I like your imagery and phrasing. I wish there is a way to paint your blue with white.

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