Sunday, November 1, 2009

Just Beyond The Rainbow’s End Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a green and pleasant land,
where I wish to spend my retiring years.
A land that has tall mountains
that reach up to the sky,
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David Harris
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Jean Dament 04 November 2009

What a beautiful & soothing poem that sounds like heaven to me. Thanks for this one. 'aches of land'-should it be 'acres of land? ' Ravensong

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Patti Masterman 01 November 2009

I think it is Ireland you're thinking of (smile) . This is a beautiful sentimental journey inside of a poem.

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Tsira Goge 01 November 2009

many aches of land, with cooling streams that flow through the heart of this green and pleasant land that lies just beyond the rainbow’s end. ................................................................... Beautiful a poem of hopes... It is healthy, pleasant to read, David, 10........ Tsira

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Carol Gall 01 November 2009

beautiful david sounds like paradise 10

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