Sunday, October 25, 2009

Just Beyond The Heartaches Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just beyond the heartaches,
there is a new beginning somewhere.
As one door closes
another opens elsewhere.
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David Harris
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Patti Masterman 25 October 2009

I love the positive feel to your poems. They never make one feel hopeless. I won't mention any of the perpetrators of that..(a-hem...) {smile}

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Carol Gall 25 October 2009

inspiring to those needing doors 10

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Tsira Goge 25 October 2009

As one door closes another opens elsewhere. ............................................................ Yes... Who will knock, for them will be opened - precisely... 10x10.... Thanks for fine words David.. All the best, Tsira

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Sandra Martyres 25 October 2009

David, I love the way you always bring in a ray of hope into your poetry...it is such a lovely message that you pass on to your readers...We all need to take a cue from you...This opening stanza of this one is really beautiful: 'Just beyond the heartaches, there is a new beginning somewhere. As one door closes another opens elsewhere.'

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Meggie Gultiano 25 October 2009

Just beyond the heartaches, a new beginning begins to take us on loves journey through the highs and lows once more. ................... these lines says it all. Like your well loved JUST BEYOND THE SUNSET..., this piece will go a long way.An outstanding write.. Hugs, Lil sis

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