Monday, May 18, 2009

Just Beyond 'Me'. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Outside of self a world awaits
For love signs. - I want to see
Just beyond 'me', then can create
An easier day for other
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Fay Slimm
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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

I liked this phrase.. 'Just beyond ' me ' is a challenge Which demands much, and is waiting' well cant say i really liked it, cause i m still 21 and feels afraid when i see the challenges that lies ahead in life nice one

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Carl Harris 28 May 2009

This splendid poem is a wonderful reminder of the old golden rule, Fay, 'Do unto others as you would have them do unto you.' It is far more personally rewarding to help a friend, or even a stranger, deal with the pains of life or reversals of fortune regarding love or happiness. Giving that kind word, a pat on the back, or a hand in friendship, accomplishes so much not only for the one helped, but for you, the giver of love and friendship and good cheer! Carl.

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Naidz Ladia 27 May 2009

this is very nice...just beyond us GOD IS WATCHING...NAIZZ

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going beyond you is the greatest favour to the me too...but it would resist to leave you to...great poem

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Fiona Davidson 18 May 2009

As always Fay you hit the nail on the head...helping others is much more rewarding than helping yourself...beautful poetry...Fi...10++++

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kind, considerate writ.... and right.. this is

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Sue Sie 18 May 2009

A very well written verse here Fay...to help others..is very good in the 'feel good' factor...always nice for the same to be returned...10++ Sue

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