Thursday, September 24, 2009

Just Beyond Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything has a beyondness.
Happenings end, and after 'now'
Is a world of it's own, - wonder,
Outside the present time endows
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Fay Slimm
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Sandra Martyres 27 September 2009

Just Beyond is indeed a very imagianative piece....Good write as usual Fay.10

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Kerry O'Connor 24 September 2009

A fine flight of poetic fancy.

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Tom Balch 24 September 2009

Perfect title for a perfect piece Fay,10+++ regards Tom

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Bob Gibson 24 September 2009

That place where inspiration breeds just enough to fulfill our needs teasing, taunting, pleasing thought we dabble, with that, we were not taught

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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