Just Believe Comments

I am so bowled over by your ability to bring across all these feelings so poetically beautifully unyet so simple to analyse. What I have read of yours so far is amazing. This one I could really relate to. 10/10

'...the past is still omnipresent...' the wisest of words...what makes you to give and take is the past...it moves your barge in the ocean present towards the future's shore...a good write...10

just believe in life something is taken and something is given i completely agree with you Rani.you have to pay a price for everything you get. very serious theme with deep reflection on the plight of human beings. yes words that come from the heart live for ever.

Just believe that in life, something is taken Something is given Rani I loved this..it revolves on a meaningful existence of past present and future... Just belive in life... it is a beautiful experience.....10

Wow! ! ! this is an amazing piece, Just believe that in life, something is taken Something is given All is forgiven: tomorrow will come beautiful Thankyou Rani, Love duncan X

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Rani, this is such a tender, sensitive and warm write. It's the kind of thing I would send to a woeful friend, it is very uplifting and encouraging. HG: -) xx

Rani I dont know, somewhat flattered, I thankyou for your kindness and will treasure your comments, it really does give belief in ones self, what a heart you have and a friendship I am so lucky to own. I have voted dont know if I should have, beautiful poem Chris x

Nice poem referral of the glorious moments kept in memory...sweet