Tuesday, April 10, 2018

Just Before The Mystical Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Misty veil of night is unveiled,
Just before the arrival of dawn,
Little golden stars are seen smiling,
Behind the trees hope is awakened.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Valsa George 16 April 2018

The beauty of the morn is picturesquely expressed linking it with spiritual reawakening! Beautiful write!

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Unwritten Soul 11 April 2018

When i read this, i feel how calm it is if this poem is going to be recited and to be heard with eyes closed, i see shadow of blue with scattered dim lights, but when i see your picture, it has different colour but with similar imagery, this poetry is a peaceful, calm work of art!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 April 2018

Kumarmani ji, this is a poem not only with beautiful imagery but is most mystical as well. Anything mystical, makes my heart sing with joy. Misty veil of the night is most fascinatingly unveiled with the awakened souls experiencing a glow of light. Marvellous poem.........10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 April 2018

Zeal of light! ! Nature! Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 April 2018

Spellbinding spiritual and nature write. Mixing nature and spiritual write at its best. It expresses in beautiful detail the wonders and beauty of dawn, that part of the day when we experienced fathomless bliss... A great piece.10

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Susan Williams 10 April 2018

This is a magnificent and mystical poem! ! ! I was instantly drawn into your beautiful dawn world of souls experiencing fathomless bliss. I think this is absolutely the best poem you've written- - you drew me into this spiritual state and I don't want to leave so into my fav list it goes so I can reread it over and over again. 10++++++++++++++++++

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Excellent writing. This poem has so much depth Kumarmani10+ Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Nudershada Cabanes 10 April 2018

A beautifully crafted poem Sir Kumar that captures the beauty of dawn.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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