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Indeed an enigma / riddle about existence of God Well it is a good poem….. but without eating pudding how I’ll say about pudding. LOL. But about Mother well She [not she] is God to me. Nice concept and varied way you cultivate upon. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Invite you to read and comment: LINGERIE- IG [new post.] Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv Thanks Dada for comments. niv

Astonishing dialogue with God. Expressed with great fervour. Extraordinary words. Pleasing narration. Brilliant thought. Magnificient. Superb.

dear sarwar this is so nice poem, faith will save you! luwi

I like the style and the clear description of words being used. It helps me to strengthen my faith to God. Keep up the good works.

Continue to write as God is amused much of your presentation...very much interesting...great work+++++++++10

How heartwarming! ! It is a 10! Only dedicated poet can make such beautiful poem! !

a nice dedication to God...! ! ! : D

Stupendous indeed! He is most def. our creator! very nicely written! ! 10/10! keep writing!

God is kind however we don't seem to understand him always because he knows more than we do. It is nice reading this poem since it is meaningful.

god is whom created us and all we do must be for him....i like your style keep going

I.N.V.U....Ienviyu...I envy you.....! ! ! ! Womans are God's ray.... but in my religion, Woman is the World's jewelry... that if the womans are broken, then the world will be as well.... Nice poem! ! ! (as much as i dont want to admit....) Thanks for offering! ! ! =D

Sarwar, you are some poet. I have not seen such a great poem. Thanks for encouraging my work too.

It's a nice poem, brilliant composition that tells which side of your faith is, some of it is true though!

Bravo! Bravo! this is some poem you know. just keep that faith burning.

This is a very creative piece of work. Keep writing!

great job! ! i really liked it

very creative, you are very talented, continue this unique form of writing!

beautiful poem sarwar.

a wonderful prayer...your pen was well blessed with such talents and creativity.10

This is a beautiful poem sarwar. This is a blessing work of an art.