Saturday, August 2, 2008

* Just Before The God Comments

Rating: 4.0

Dear God
being obsessed by incisive heartiest expressions
I am expressing to you- 'the Creator without directions'
that you know, I am in the act of washing Myself with love.
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sarwar chowdhury
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 October 2009

Indeed an enigma / riddle about existence of God Well it is a good poem….. but without eating pudding how I’ll say about pudding. LOL. But about Mother well She [not she] is God to me. Nice concept and varied way you cultivate upon. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Invite you to read and comment: LINGERIE- IG [new post.] Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv Thanks Dada for comments. niv

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Mubeen Sadhika 25 August 2009

Astonishing dialogue with God. Expressed with great fervour. Extraordinary words. Pleasing narration. Brilliant thought. Magnificient. Superb.

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Luwi Habte 27 July 2009

dear sarwar this is so nice poem, faith will save you! luwi

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Susan Aparejo 08 July 2009

I like the style and the clear description of words being used. It helps me to strengthen my faith to God. Keep up the good works.

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Indira Renganathan 03 December 2008

Continue to write as God is amused much of your presentation...very much interesting...great work+++++++++10

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Min Sia 09 November 2008

How heartwarming! ! It is a 10! Only dedicated poet can make such beautiful poem! !

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 08 October 2008

a nice dedication to God...! ! ! : D

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Stephanie Saba 07 October 2008

Stupendous indeed! He is most def. our creator! very nicely written! ! 10/10! keep writing!

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rohit sapra 24 September 2008

God is kind however we don't seem to understand him always because he knows more than we do. It is nice reading this poem since it is meaningful.

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Anna jonson 10 September 2008

god is whom created us and all we do must be for him....i like your style keep going

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Hana K 09 September 2008

I.N.V.U....Ienviyu...I envy you.....! ! ! ! Womans are God's ray.... but in my religion, Woman is the World's jewelry... that if the womans are broken, then the world will be as well.... Nice poem! ! ! (as much as i dont want to admit....) Thanks for offering! ! ! =D

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Jay P. Narain 02 September 2008

Sarwar, you are some poet. I have not seen such a great poem. Thanks for encouraging my work too.

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Nina Joseph 28 August 2008

It's a nice poem, brilliant composition that tells which side of your faith is, some of it is true though!

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Moana Tuigamala 26 August 2008

Bravo! Bravo! this is some poem you know. just keep that faith burning.

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Kadelia Achille 23 August 2008

This is a very creative piece of work. Keep writing!

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Charlotte Davis 21 August 2008

great job! ! i really liked it

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Sandra J. 19 August 2008

very creative, you are very talented, continue this unique form of writing!

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Sayuri Nitta 16 August 2008

beautiful poem sarwar.

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C T Heart 16 August 2008

a wonderful prayer...your pen was well blessed with such talents and creativity.10

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Riquetta Elliott 15 August 2008

This is a beautiful poem sarwar. This is a blessing work of an art.

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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