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Pease give one more reading to the poem as a common reader and then decide whether it needs a fresh treatment.. The subject is very appealing but the impact is missing, Pranab.

you never told pain is your touching -the central attention for lines in this poetry.Its never told coz` pain is immeasurable and there is no instrument scientifically designed to measure it.Pain is therefore untold.When you try to tell people of your pain, you are simply misconstrued coz what is literally painful in english means pain-Bread in French.When French are giving you bread, your pain could have well been hunger as understood but might be not that the one you hinted as pain.Nothing pays for the pain.Only silence and embarrassment.