Just Before Death Comments
You gave food to me when I needed food,
you gave water to me when I needed it,
you touched my head and played with my horn,
I still feel your palm on my neck and on my back,
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Love touched heart and spirit through service and that is why this comes in mind always. But fearful moment of saying good bye puzzles mind. Separation is painful. Life and death and love and life run like this only. Very amazing sharing.10
The feelings of sacrificial animals was nicely written, we with human heart seldom care for others but here in this case when you are ordered to sacrifice the best you have we find an escape route....Thought provoking poem.We seldom understand that we are asked to sacrifice our false Ego, Material possessions and inhumane things.10+
You have have nicely understood and interpreted the spirit of the poem penned by Akhtar Jawad Sahab. Thank you, Asim ji.
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7/29/2025 10:15:24 AM # 1.0.0
So powerful, so dramatic, so emotional yet so real. A very poignant poem with a great message. Thanks for sharing, Sir.