Just Because... Comments

Pretty intense. Yet simply amazing.

i have to go with what MMI said... and yes, i believe you do have the guts... no one's immune to any form of pain, we just choose to run. we have feelings for a reason. that being to learn, and grow. i love the way you easily express yourself..in writing. you're good. thanks for sharing

Loved your poem.. so.. meaningful! ..

You are not immune...you feel every word, feel every pain, but at this point, choose to ignore it, it is self defense..it is our way of dealing with something to harsh to deal with...maybe go the other way, and hit this head on...go deal with this pain, but it takes guts...this i believe you have, but this path can be very painful... good luck.. MMI

interesting poem........ very sad........... pain creates sensational poetry sometimes! ! !

how sad.... i say no one can actually be immune to any form of pain, but they put it in their heads simply so life may be less painful and disappoitning. not saying that i know what you've been through and where you've been.... just that you're young, and i'm guessing that you have been through alot, so you're doing what you can to protect yourself. completely understandable... this was queit interesting to read.