(I just found out that Brautigan has a very similar poem...same title, similar pattern. I had never heard of Brautigan before today and I hope everyone recognizes that I wasn't trying to infringe on anything. I'm still keeping this poem up, however, because I like it.)
Just because
You hang a feather
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I have some beef with this poem. Brautigan did/wrote something strikingly similar, and long before you. The title is a mimicry, yet the subject matter is different.