Monday, July 3, 2017

Just Another Storm Comments

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Having chosen a plebeian life,
I missed the muttering alleyways.
I heard it all from insane poets
tucked away in the cannibal asylum,
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 18 July 2017

The life's journey nicely depicted, to persuade you that storms are better than hash!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2017

It is a beautiful poem on life and death with wonderful imagery. Nice penmanship. It may be quoted here... I learned of desire in auburn curls on summer nights beneath the universe, reflected below in a million fireflies disappearing in the burgundy velvet of a first kiss. Thanks for sharing.

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Barry Middleton 04 July 2017

Thank you, very glad you liked it. And yes, I like the section you quoted too.

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Upendra Upm 03 July 2017

sheer beauty sir.in one breath I consumed this.

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Barry Middleton 03 July 2017

Thanks, glad you like it. It's a composite of bits and pieces of my life.

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