Monday, August 21, 2006

Just Another Storm Poem Comments

Rating: 4.5

All day the sky had been
Mediterranean blue
But then the evening breeze brought in
One tiny dark grey cloud
...
Read full text

Marilyn Shepperson
COMMENTS
Susan Williams 11 September 2018

And with a slow thud, thud, thud The rain then came down Which suddenly became a cascade Drumming hard upon the roofs The lightening scratched across the sky- - - Excellent! ! ! !

2 0 Reply
Susan Williams 18 October 2015

The grammar and spelling issues detract from the educated readers' enjoyment of a very good piece

12 0 Reply
John Tiong Chunghoo 19 September 2006

it is lightning and not lightening. the poem is jarring because the ideas were not presented in proper sequence.

0 0 Reply
Vision Ghost 26 August 2006

Particularly the manner to which utter chaos of the storm is described, as though the winds and the storm compete for skyward supremacy. As a lover of storms as you know, this struck a chord with me.

0 0 Reply
Marilyn Shepperson

Marilyn Shepperson

Hounslow. Middx
Close
Error Success