Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Just Another Girl Comments

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As I walk down the school halls,
I wonder if he notices me at all.
If he think's I'm pretty in any way.
Hoping he'll come one day.
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alice spakrs
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Sandy Player 11 January 2013

You have subtly weaved in a lot of effects that society has caused to do with gender capabilities, expectations and requierements. In many ways society's sophistry causes much pointless daily hardships such as this. Very clever this one.

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