Saturday, October 13, 2012

Just Another Day Comments

Rating: 4.4

Just another day, when my heart sings with the sweetness,
Of endless loving things,
Souls intertwined and locked, as deep as the Grand Canyon,
Please don't mock,
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Hazel Durham
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Farah Ilyas 12 May 2013

to search for a love is a great thing in world if supported by your optimistic feelings...nice poem

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woooooooooow that's an amazing poem Hazel WELL DONE

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You ar a great writer hazel, keep writing1

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Kanav Justa 09 December 2012

written straight from the heart, , , , , nicee

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Owain Glyn 21 November 2012

I have just read two of your pieces, both dedicated to those close to you and both shining with Love, I shall look at some more

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Marcus Mckinley 19 November 2012

eternity can be conquered together with a lifetime of love. nice write

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Kevin East 01 November 2012

Romantic with great imagery. Your words link like the petals of a flower...superb[again].

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Dave Walker 22 October 2012

To find true love is the best thing in the world. A fantastic poem.

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Asif Andalib 22 October 2012

I like your optimistic way of thinking. A wonderful poem

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Valsa George 20 October 2012

This is beautiful! Such cheerful way of looking at life and things! We get a boost on reading it! !

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 19 October 2012

your heart print, thanks for sharing

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 October 2012

the words chosen to write this poem make this poem wonderful! Nice!

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Aung Si 18 October 2012

Our world is rich, vivid with colours blending smoothly, Honesty binding us like sheaves of hay, So powerful with this sort of verses.Btw; he is more than a king, really?

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Valerie Dohren 15 October 2012

Lovely write Hazel, very expressive.

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Ramesh Rai 15 October 2012

My man is full of spirit and fun, he is more than a king, Pat is an ace, grand write. accept my votes too. keep it up my frnd.

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Rick Elpers 14 October 2012

Hazel, this is such a hopeful write to those who have not achieved such splendor in a relation with another. The idea that you can persevere life with someone by your side as you describe is the ideal! ! ! Thank you for giving us a glimps into your heart. Pat is a very lucky fellow indeed.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 October 2012

I actually admird yor take on d grand canyon! Superb rhymin throughout too! Liked how u say lovin doe. And true ordinary men can b kingly. My votes accept.

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