Just another day, when my heart sings with the sweetness,
Of endless loving things,
Souls intertwined and locked, as deep as the Grand Canyon,
Please don't mock,
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woooooooooow that's an amazing poem Hazel WELL DONE
You ar a great writer hazel, keep writing1
I have just read two of your pieces, both dedicated to those close to you and both shining with Love, I shall look at some more
eternity can be conquered together with a lifetime of love. nice write
Romantic with great imagery. Your words link like the petals of a flower...superb[again].
To find true love is the best thing in the world. A fantastic poem.
This is beautiful! Such cheerful way of looking at life and things! We get a boost on reading it! !
the words chosen to write this poem make this poem wonderful! Nice!
Our world is rich, vivid with colours blending smoothly, Honesty binding us like sheaves of hay, So powerful with this sort of verses.Btw; he is more than a king, really?
My man is full of spirit and fun, he is more than a king, Pat is an ace, grand write. accept my votes too. keep it up my frnd.
Hazel, this is such a hopeful write to those who have not achieved such splendor in a relation with another. The idea that you can persevere life with someone by your side as you describe is the ideal! ! ! Thank you for giving us a glimps into your heart. Pat is a very lucky fellow indeed.
I actually admird yor take on d grand canyon! Superb rhymin throughout too! Liked how u say lovin doe. And true ordinary men can b kingly. My votes accept.
to search for a love is a great thing in world if supported by your optimistic feelings...nice poem