Just An Empty Soul Comments

These Words could be written about me. Just the way i feel or beter feel nothing except my love for her

Ana your poem is very beautiful, I love your use of language and your honesty. thanks jack

This is very moving ana, and sometimes love can trully hurt more than any other pain known to mankind, however, one that is desitined to lead us to other paths and walks of life, which would make our life a better one... Very moving and your flow was trully good..... Bonnie

Very good. I like it very much.

You capture such realness, something I aspire towards.