Friday, March 12, 2010

Just An Answer To Why Comments

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Why can we not see beyond the sky?
Why is our world confined to a planet?
Why is the planet confined in a universe?
Why can the poor not see beyond poverty,
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shona sengupta
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Gita Ashok 22 May 2010

This poem is steeped in philosophy. It made me wonder why I never thought of many of the 'whys' before! I like the way you introduced a rhyming pattern in the latter half of your poem. Great work!

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