Friday, February 17, 2012

'Just An Accident' Comments

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When I try to make things better it just seems they get worse,
I cause things I don't mean to and 'getting better' is something I can't force,
Should I give up because I cannot make things better?
It tears me apart knowing I just make eyes wetter...
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Adrian Shorey
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 23 May 2012

full of ryhme mastering......i really like it, but you try to offer your pains and sadness in the form of a poem. overall, it is prefect.

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Adrian Shorey

Adrian Shorey

Waterville ME
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