Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Just After Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

just after rain
when the water lies hesitant and pure
on the roads and footpaths
and a few cars still have their lights on
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Ross Clark
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2020

The water lies hesitant and pure on the roads and footpaths just after rain. You have amazingly perceived the situation and brilliantly expressed the imagery of rain. This poem is excellently penned....10

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Valerie Dohren 23 May 2012

Nice piece of poetry - you may like to read mine entitled After The Rain.

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