Sunday, March 19, 2006

Just Add Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

With just-add-water-to-your-life
some people manage to exist,
but like a flower every wife
needs more than water when she’s kissed.
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Louise Marie Delsanto 19 March 2006

I enjoyed the humor dispersed throughout the poem. I enjoy romanticism interplay with words that you cleverly placed throughout, also. I give you a 10, Gershon. Excellent read!

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