Sunday, April 13, 2014

Just A Wish Upon A Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rivers cut and wind through the lush countryside,
Your love cut's and wind's through my besotted heart,
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Hazel Durham
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2018

It is a beautiful poem on love having haunting expression and nice collocation. I want to quote here someines........ To always love each other, like a rose that eternally blooms, No time for any days of gloom, We walked back to our digs and our simple room, As the dawn broke with the tuneful chorus of birds. Thanks for sharing.10

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Ken E Hall 19 October 2014

Lovely poem with very nice thoughts in the sky among the stars wow love is surely in the air 'Always dancing and having plenty of fun, Forever under the warm light of our own sun.' A melting pot of love...regards

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Ramesh Rai 30 April 2014

So much kindness and love are flushed through soft write.

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Sekharan Pookkat 27 April 2014

A beautiful romantic poem- i like it

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Yash Shinde 25 April 2014

.........a poem packed with emotions, a cute short poem overflowing with love and imagery............ ........Full of positiveness, it beautifully brings together love mates into a an eternal unison........... A lovely write from your pen again........

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Valerie Dohren 21 April 2014

Very romantic poem, beautifully written.

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Tanya Gupta 21 April 2014

a new and another great poem by you........well done

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Lyn Paul 20 April 2014

Even the trees acknowledging how we feel. A beautiful write Hazel filling us all with incredible memories. Thank You

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Dinesan Madathil 20 April 2014

A poem rich in images and illustrations thereof. These days in the shade are our great times.

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Kanav Justa 19 April 2014

, , , , such a sweet write, , , the love that you jave seems so pure and real, , just like that of a child, , , , with wonderfull examples you have expressed your feelings in this poem, , , , this might be the cutest love poem from your pen, , , wonderrfull..

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Chuy Amante 13 April 2014

Oh my, my heartbeat increased, that kind of love can raise the deceased!

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Mihaela Pirjol 13 April 2014

Sweet poem, well written.I can relate to it. Mihaela

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