Thursday, March 10, 2016

Just A While Ago.....! Comments

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Ignited flame in to balloon
Carrying me up, up in heavens
For how long, I would' know
Down in a thud, by my bed......
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Edward Kofi Louis 30 August 2016

Bafflement! With an element of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Brian Mayo 19 May 2016

Your poem works well- -it's as light and breezy as your dream.

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thank you Brian.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2016

Balloon carries the ignited flame to take up in to heaven. This wonderful and humorous poem shared touches mind of a reader. Wisely penned.10

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Thank you Kumar for your encouraging remarks.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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