Just A Thought Comments

Oh my, you really are on fire! This isn't a poem is it? ..Could that be why i called it 'just a thought'? I don't know about you, but as a rule my thoughts do not include imagery, metaphors or similes..but hey. Thats just me.

Glad you're feeling better...but still this is not a poem. (sorry to say.) This is reflective prose. Try some imagery, metaphors, similes, anything that will take this away from the route of prose. Raynette

Well i've written so much depressing stuff lately, i was beginning to bring myself down! ..Thanks by the way.

I can imagine writing something like this myself, well done on your latest output.