Monday, September 14, 2015

Just A Teaser Comments

Rating: 5.0

i am sitting on a rock
trying to have little talk
suddenly somebody knock
i turned around and it was shock
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Anita Sharma
COMMENTS
Bakuli Bhakali 20 November 2015

amusing! ! thanks for sharing!

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Amitava Sur 27 September 2015

Enjoyed this tender and simple fun along with that sudden shock you got as a mock.

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Rajnish Manga 21 September 2015

Though a proclaimed teaser (as they say a proclaimed offender) , the poem has in it the elements of fun, suspense and a mysterious rhyming design. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

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Rishabh Sethia 16 September 2015

Very nice... Keep writing :)

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Kelly Kurt 14 September 2015

A fun, teaser of a poem, Anita

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