Just A Sniff Comments

Yes, loneliness can seem like an alienation of the heart and soul of an individual. Great piece of work here. God bless-MJG.

I can so relate to this... I get that feeling all the time! Wonderful poem! Brian

Once, I moved a thousand miles from home, and, when I left my train, if I hadn't seem my older brother approaching, I would have gotten on the next train home. But he was 'home' for me, and safety...Bless older bros, and thank you for reminding us what that feeling of separation feel like. Scarlett

So real, the feeling in this, we can touch it.Brilliant Love Duncan

You didn't have to be on your own.............................

I like this one too. Nicely put and works on more than one level. avr

A poem with so much meaning. I know how you feel, when we moved from London to Norfolk. I was like a fish out of water for at least a year, but now sixteen years later. I would not change it for the world. lovely poem cheers sylvia

A poem with so much meaning. I know how you feel, when we moved from London to Norfolk. I was like a fish out of water for at least a year, but now sixteen years later. I would not change it for the world. lovely poem cheers sylvia

Many people should be able to relate to this poem, not only because of experiencing 'homesickness' but because of the 'ageing' process that we all hope to go through. I like this.

Scarborough Gypsy has a certain gentility about her poetry, that reminds me of the English Lake poets. Nicely told tale

Very good. It encapsulates that sense of deja vu that we all experience from time to time.