Just A Smile Comments

a master piece type poem is this one..i read so many time and enjoyed it very much..well done dear poetry friend and thanks for all your work that you done for me in french..thanks

Extremely good advice :) and kind words

a well done job...makes you think...it's ok.

There is all the bliss in an innocent smile. Well penned. CP

A LOVELY POEM..VERY POSITIVE AND A GOOD FLOW

nice read...i like it

The one that you want to be friend with Not the one that is trying to pretend around you Come the one who your heart is directing you Because, the way that your heart is going Its safe, ant it will bring you joy Just smile to see it a sweet romantic poem, writtb professionally..I really appreciate the idea and the way you wrote..well done..liked it 10/10

A fine elixir and it's not just a smile, good luck to my young poetess!

Very nice poem on so called friends a true friend is magic Well composed in freeform with a luvli smile+++10 regards

Hi Gloria - This is a very positive poem - advice helping your friend to move from PAIN (L 2) to JOY (L 20) . I score it TEN. What is the answer? The PAIN comes form FAKE FRIENDS and trying to emulate their life style. Your advice is to seek FREE SPACE and a REAL LIFE and a REAL FRIEND - someone who brings you JOY and not PAIN. 'Come closer to the one you loved'. Someone who is REAL & SAFE not FAKE & EPHEMERAL. The result will be JOY and a real SMILE. 'Just smile to see it'. Love in Poetry - JOHN..

this is lovely gloria 10