Just A Small One Comments

Though small, this is powerful and succinct. Fine job.

Short and succinct, speaks its mind without exaggeration. An excellent penning.

Powerful little poem! just beautiful!

A clever twist of fate (so to speak) initially we taste revolting alcohol to keep up with others, then enjoy ourselves and then (when I say we I mean me) then when I lost a loved one for nearly six months it was ic. Luckily I knew it was no good for me and now it's just once a week. Great write to ponder... Ty Karen

An astute observation in a succinct poem. Good one.

ALCOHOL IN CHARGE OF YOU.......VERY SAD AND THE SITUATION IS VERY GLOOM, THE POEM IS VERY LITTLE BUT VERY POWERFUL WITH GOOD IMPACT, I LIKE THE POEM AND I LIKE YOU TO READ MY NEW POEMS ALSO.

pretty much... and sadly, becomes a form of slavery. good poem.