Sunday, May 19, 2013

Just A Reminder Comments

Rating: 4.5

We were once total strangers with larcenous hearts
So we grew together to be pulled apart
Still say, never say never, to each other’s sparks
Or touching each other when one needs recharged
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R.J. Wynn
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Farah Ilyas 22 May 2013

Rhymic & rhydhemic effect make your poem more romantic more descriptive....wonderful reminder for your loved one indeed

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Unwritten Soul 20 May 2013

Got enough of sugar after reading this.....so sweet, ah i need plain water more to dilute it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _SOul

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