Just A Plain Girl Comments

missing something great from the loving life it's pain, hurts much the internal kingdom of memory though there is living life as usual though there the rising sun or the day or the rising moon of the night plays their game as usual though there there the relatives comes and goes makes a good relativity.........///

so it sounds as though 'she' lost her husband and her times on the stage (real or imaginary) . But she 'looks good' and is " proud" (of her life, appearance, independence?) . Still, she feels loss, a lot i believe. i like it. bri i enjoyed the sometimes-rhyming lines. :)

Whilst reading this well-crafted poem, I was thinking of all actresses with the innate talent for stage, and all the compromises they had to endure from the film industry. Unfortunately, most of the time, their true being has been ignored. A great poem.

Visible in a shallow world! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Poems from the soul are always the best ones......this held my attention to the end. Very strong poem Hazel penned with an extraordinary depth of feeling...... Great post 👏

Wonderful poem wonderfully captured. Thanks for sharing.

Wow! It's amazing how you could write something on the other side of the world, that speaks to me so profoundly. If I didn't know better I would swear, you had access to my thoughts. I can't wait to read more!

ye we should never ever lose what unique thing we have within us..................we all are freighted with talents..........we are all unique.............so there it is not needed to imitate somebody..............if we do so we lose our inbred assets...................very nice message is reflected from this wonderful poem...............greatly enjoyed it.

A wonderful poem, wrote in a lovely style..................................10

A simple girl, to win the admiration of her husband took to acting! Initially though it wasn't a great success, with time she began to live in her characters and won everyone's attention. Later at some time she quit her acting profession! Though she is happy in her own way, often she is lured by the passion for the stage and feels that the actor in her is still alive! A talent cannot die, even if it is smothered by time! A great write with an intimate tone!

Hazel, it's a beautiful poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, rhyming has added a special charm to the poem, thanks for sharing, , if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.