Saturday, August 6, 2016

Just A Move Comments

Rating: 4.0

It is just a move
From the extreme dark
To twinkling light;
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Partha Pratim Goswami
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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 26 August 2016

very very beautiful line of your poem which I really like from deep of my heart..... It is just a move From the blood smeared cloth To a spotless one White, bright and smooth Pouring joy and peace; you really write awesome poem Partha....... bahut hi behatareen poem........aapke poem men jabardast message hota hai Goswami g..........meri subhkamnaye aapke sath hai....ummid hai aapki agali kavita(next poem) jald hi padhne ko milegi......thanks a lot.......GOD bless you my friend.....

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 24 August 2016

nice poem with nice message.......great! 10+++

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Great response from you, Thank you for reading the poem carefully

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Gandalf The Grey 06 August 2016

A touching contrast of fortune and the opposite

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