Tuesday, August 5, 2014

Just A Minute Comments

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A lovely meadow under the sky
Clouds chatter at its turn
Some yak for awhile or more
But rest of them is in a queue
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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2014

Wonderful lines.....Just loved reading it. But the sky was in a hurry It flew to the next charm….. I loved the description of nature, you have portrayed it well.

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Sanjibsaha Aniketa 05 August 2014

'the sky was in a hurry'- Beautiful.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 August 2014

Beutiful sights are for a while only, how short is the life of a rose flower and handsome men rarely enjoy a long life. A beautiful poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 August 2014

Simply beautiful.......Some aspects of Nature's beauty very well described.......

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