Saturday, May 10, 2008

Just A Minute! Comments

Rating: 5.0

(This piece is a 'minute' - 60 syllables,844484448444, and rhymed AABB, etc..)

October turned the leaves to gold
but now the cold
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Paul Hansford
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Nathan Chilton 28 January 2010

you are a very good writer and i love the way you do your poems goodlook thanks and take care love and light nathan xx

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 October 2009

‘…for spring's rebirth’ Wow! ! Spring is jubilant juvenile. Well and jocund touch down. Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to my page. P.S. It bears fragrances of numerals so 10x6=60 types of perfumes from me. LOL! niv

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I am in total awe Paul. With a 60 syllable count and the sequential rhyme this as well as your Reflection I consider to be a work of art. The bitter blast of November wind tearing the last faded leaves down, brought ME beautifully down to Springs rebirth. Loved it! Karin Anderson

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Alessandra Liverani 13 May 2008

'A great poem' was all I wanted to say I thought those three words would suffice to convey My thoughts on a poem which has great structure and style But I needed 20 characters, so a few more words I added to the pile!

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Callie Carroll 10 May 2008

Lovely. My sustaining glimpse of nature's beauty for the day, even though I am stuck inside cooking a feast.Thanks.

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