Monday, May 29, 2006

^*! *^just A Memory! Comments

Rating: 2.9

Told myself today was gonna be the day
No more excuses~~I knew just what to say
Battin' my eyes, I know what to play
Ah damn, I let the moment slip away
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Ebone' Ingram 09 August 2006

It reminds me a little of my poem 'Aggressive.' I like your poetry a lot. You have a very distinct tone of writing, and you're not afraid to say what you need to say. Good job. Eni da kid

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SURE THINGS WENT WELL FOR AWHILE...THONGS ON THE RIGHT WOMAN HAVE AN AMAZING EFFECT ON MEN....JUST KIDDIN'W/ YA...THIS IS A GREAT WRITE...FULL OFCONNECTIVE ENERGY & FINE IMAGERY, WHICH IS A VERY STROG SUIT FOR YOU...A WRITER THAT CAN PAINT THEIR WORDS IS A WRITER WHO CAN TAKE ANYTHING AVERAGE AND RETURN IT SUPERIOR, , , AND THATS JUST WHAT YOU DO YOUNG LASSIE.''''''FRANK

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Mary Nagy 29 May 2006

Hey, I give anyone credit if they can wear a thong out in public! (Especially since I see you said you have 2 kids!) Good for you Kristin! Very nice poem. Sincerely, mary

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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