*just A Little Mistake, Daddy* Comments

God forgive us all who have in so many ways shattered the lives of others .. Father forgive us for we knew not what we did

can relate with u dear...only the poet can create the magic of of even grief. 10+

so sad... but a really great poem...

beware of the Electra Syndrome, the tribute has many mixed emotions and is well presented,10 what about more poems cheers Shimon

Never regret the love you had for your father Mary, regardless of the circumstances I'm certain he loved you just as much. Why wouldn't he?

Compassion pours from every line of this tender-hearted poem about the tragic consequences of family breakdown. Let us hope that this honest and impassioned expression of your feelings of loss and betrayal may enable you to begin the long road to acceptance and forgiveness. I used to tell my kids that there's always enough love to go round, because as the family grows, so does the love, like Adam Lindsay's Magic Puddin'. I'm sure your Daddy adored his little girl to the end. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

aww it made me cry! very good written! best wishes =)

aweeeeeeeeeee so sad........well written

Unanswerable questions posed in poetic prose.

A piece of pathetic practical experience described in so beautiful manner! It deserves 10.

10 Put together very well Similar experience excpt with my mom Know your pain -Brie

Very fine contruction Deserve 10 on 10 Keep going.....

a touching verses concept..a wonderful tribute to a father.. Ency Bearis

poignant longing and tender emotions you have some minor grammatical mistakes when you correct them i will rate this lovely poem cheers shimon

A heart rendering composition from a young girl who has suffered more than a normal being. The piousness of the love for dad and the sullen departing has been traced so lucidly and artistically that it raises the piece into greater heights..Well done

Im so sorry Mimzy.Dad's were tempted to the beauty of love but he overlooked the eternal love to a child!

daddy knows the depth of love by the daugter but too much painful by the reeks of darkened shadow.........wonderful tribute a father, ruefully poignant, tears gleans in the eyes by trembling heart, hurtful sorrow, yet tears falls by the lucid flow racking the whole being, wrought ingenious,10+, thanks for sharing