...............Just A Human Being Comments

the concept is just so powerful in itself that would have made this poem outstand any other one but to the top of it the selection of words, the flow, the emotions everything crisply presented has indeed created a magic in this work of yours.... and these lines: 'so i just became a human being because i so well know what pain means........ ' just say it all... an amazing work.. totally like it

brilliant....poem and content....full marks then i tried to be a smile but sorrow just failed me..... then i wanted to be beauty but arrogance veiled me..... and i'll add from ulyses... 'it is not in the destiny of us mortals to demand success...we can do better my friends we can desrve it....' hv great days and fun cheers