Just A Hello Comments
I was all ears!
To hear a call from you,
To hear your soft whispers,
To hear your sighs you let go.
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Just a hello....can fill the heart with the concerto of the loveliest music....played over and over, filling the balcony of our soul, with the acoustics of long awaited love....hello....hello....hello....so beautiful, when spoken from the lips we long for. PEACE
Oh, so poetically explained what I tried to say in simple words! Thank you, dear Susan Lacovara, for augmenting my poem with your ornamental offering. Much inspired and obliged! I've just read your poem - 'After The Towers Fell' and commented on it.
Patience sir, it will come. This poem brings familiar thoughts, this brings smile.
This is actually very nice indeed Khairul. I have also found myself waiting for a phone call from far away or even from a loved one nearby. It is funny that the simple things in live can mean so much. Even a phone call with just a hello how are you? can boost the spirits. Very enlightening.
Thank you Patricia Grantham, for stopping by and leaving a comment here. Much inspired by your kind appreciation. I've read your wonderful poem - 'Peace' and left a comment there.
@ Cassandra Jasmine, Thanks for reading my poem, offering the nice words and giving it a generous 10/10. The ideas come naturally. Read my 'Biography Of A Poem'.
Very emotional plea. You express it so well. Wonderful poem!
Thank you Lora, glad that you visited my page and left a kind comment on my poem. I always look forward to having your comment on my poem. Your poems inspire me to write like you, if not as good, though. I've just read your poem - 'No More Than This' and left a comment there.
Heart only knows how important A hello is! We all wait for someone in our lives. But you gave meaning to it: -)
Thank you, @Rekha Mandagere, for reading this poem of mine and leaving a kind comment. Much inspired by your thoughtful comment.
This poem is nice... Who are you writing about? I'm just curious... Not one of my favorite poems... but oh well.
Poets write many things on imagination. Not all the emotions and feelings expressed have to be their own. 'Not one of my favorite poems' -*- That's okay, thanks for reading and leaving a comment, @Ethan Ying.
Great poem, Mr. Ahsan! How do you come up with so many ideas for poems, yet inspiration is sometimes hard-found in me? Anyways, it captures a grerat, serene feeling. A 10 from me!
As usual, I am much inspired by your reading of this poem and leaving kind words of appreciation. Thank you, Cassie.
@Linda Marie Van Tassell, Thanks for your comment. I am amazed by your deep thoughts about the essence of the poem. 'Sometimes, anticipation creates the longest mile.' This is a priceless observation, a quotable quote. Thank you.
You have captured well those life-stopping moments when we linger on the cusp of living and not living, of holding our breaths waiting for the one we love to call, waiting for that person's voice to bring us back to life again. Sometimes, anticipation creates the longest mile.
@ Beauteous Victory, A short comment, but means so much to me! Thank You.
@Crystal Ruth, Thanks a lot for the comment. I am inspired.
Like it :) like how it flows and how it was written. Great job :)
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Your words caress with such tenderness and love oozing from the page, with such delicacy and softness like fluffy white clouds overflowing with your tears for the longing of hearing from your beloved! Stunning write!
@Hazel Durham, I am indeed overwhelmed by your generous appraisal of my poem. Thank you so much, dear poet!