Just A Guy Comments

Your poem is very clear and i liked the way you expressed yourself

i understand this very, very much. great job. i hope you are doing better.

very good start indeed... being true to one's self, letting it all out through a pen. try writing about the things that affect you, may it be in or out of the realm of 'love', with the same conviction you have in this one, it'll shape you up as a poet. keep writing.

hello sweety :) nice start and i truely undersatnd what u r going through but be strong and true with a passionate girl like you life is not a dead piece. ok nice start for poems. i like to read about tender loves.