Saturday, November 19, 2005

Just A Game Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pissing in the wind
Missing all your friends
Keep running backwards
You talk but lack words
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Nicole Ronne
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Peter Lebuhn 29 December 2005

Hi Nicole, Me again this is really good work. Though each line is short much thought is provoked. Very hard to do. a 10 from me. I have a piece similiar to this called Chameleon I think you will like it. It is about the United States and Russia During the Cold War Well you will see

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Tiffany Svarplaitis 19 November 2005

dude thsi is really good you need to like be a proffesional. i wish i was as good as you!

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David Gerardino 19 November 2005

NICE POEM, ..................................................

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